Ukwakheka okuhle okusekelwe "Kusihlwa kusihlwa" kaKrymov

Abafundi bavame ukucelwa ukuba babhale izingqungquthela eziqoshiwe ekhaya. Lona umsebenzi wokudala, ngakho wonke umuntu angaziveza emisebenzini enjalo. Ukwakhiwa komdwebo kaKrymov "Ngobusuku Busihlwa" kuzosiza ukungena ezweni langaphakathi lomntwana futhi uqonde umbono wakhe wezwe. Lokhu kubaluleke kakhulu, ngoba ngezinye izikhathi kunzima ukusho ukuthi yini engqondweni yakho. Futhi ukugcwaliseka okunenjongo komsebenzi wokudala ngokuqinisekile kuzokwembulela okuhlangenwe nakho nesimo sendodana noma indodakazi.

Indlela yokubhala inhlawulo emdwebeni kaKrymov "Usuku lokushisa"

Azikho izidingo ezithile zokubhala izinhlamvu. Phela, lokhu kuyisenzo sokudala, okusho ukuthi zonke izifanekiso zingabhekwa njengendlela yokusebenza. Into ebaluleke kakhulu ukuthi yonke imicabango kufanele ihanjiswe ngendlela efanele futhi idlulise ngokugcwele umqondo womsebenzi wobuciko.

Kubalulekile ukutshela yonke imininingwane yesithombe. Kuphela kulokhu, ukwakheka komdwebo kaKrymov "Ebusika Busihlwa" kuzofanelekela ukudunyiswa okuphezulu. Kodwa yilokho kanye umphumela okulindeleke abafundi nabazali babo.

Umsebenzi oningiliziwe emdwebo kaKrymov "Usuku Lokusihlwa" ngokusho kohlelo

Ukwenza kube lula ukuba ingane ibhale indaba, kufanele utshelwe indlela yokuveza imicabango ngayo. Kulokhu kuyadingeka ukuthi uhlele uhlelo, kusukela lapho indodana noma indodakazi izokwazi ukubhala umsebenzi omuhle wokudala. Ukulandelana kokubhala kufanele kube into enjengale:

• Isingeniso esifushane. Kuleli qophelo, kubalulekile ukubhala ngokukodwa kepha ngokubalulekile ngomsebenzi womculi. Tshela ngohlobo lwesithombe, umlobi ayefuna ukukutshela, besebenzisa umdwebo wokushayela emgqeni.
• Ingxenye enkulu. Lesi yisigaba esikhulu kakhulu somsebenzi. Kuyo kubalulekile ukutshela ngokuningiliziwe ukuthi isithombe seKrymov "Ubusuku Busihlwa" sinikeza. Ukwakhiwa kumele kuthuthukiswe futhi kugcwaliswe imifudlana ehlukahlukene yokukhuluma. Okokuqala, kubalulekile ukutshela ukuthi umuzwa ovamile wenziwa nini uma ubona umsebenzi. Khona-ke udinga ukuchaza lokho okuvezwe ngaphambili kwendalo yobuciko. Okulandelayo, udinga ukuchaza ngokuningiliziwe lokho okubonakala ngemuva kwesithombe.
• Isiphetho. Gcwalisa ukubunjwa komdwebo ka-Krymov "Usuku Lokusihlwa" kuyadingeka ukuze ugcwalise incazelo elotshwe ezigabeni zangaphambilini. Kulesi sigaba kuyadingeka ukuthi utshele ukuthi iziphi izimo ezenzeka lapho ubona umsebenzi wezobuciko. Ingabe umbhali wathola isimo sengqondo futhi wadala ukuzwa okuphelele lapho ebona isithombe.

Uhlelo olunjalo lungcono kakhulu ekubhaliseni umsebenzi wokudala, lapho isithombe seKrymov "Winter Evening" sichazwa khona. Ukwakhiwa, okwakhiwa ngendlela efanele, kuzosiza ukuthola uphawu oluhle kakhulu lomsebenzi.

Ukwakhiwa kwesithombe kubafundi besikole esiphakeme

Ukuze uqonde ukuthi umsebenzi wokudala owenziwe ngomumo kufanele ubonakale kanjani, umuntu angaqaphela lokhu okulandelayo:

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Umbhali ngendlela enembile wanikeza imizwelo yakhe, ewathululela emgqeni. "Usuku Lokusihlwa" lukaKrymov lubonisa isimo seholide lasebusika nokuphefumulelwa. Umculi ubonise kahle isimo semvelo ebandayo, ehambisa amathalenta wokudala emibhalweni efanele.

Ngibheka isithombe, ngabona ngokushesha ukuthi ubusika buboniswa ngempela. Izinqamuleli ezinqamule zeqhwa zimboza konke okuzungezile. Kusukela ngaphansi kweqhwa elikhukhulayo, utshani obonakalayo obonakalayo abubonakala. Ngaphambili, ungabona futhi ukuthi izinyoni ziye zahlala eduze nezihlahla futhi zilindele abantu bendawo ukuba baphathe ngento ethile.

Ngasemuva kunezakhiwo eziningi zeqhwa. Uma ubheka izindlela ezinyathelwe, ungaqonda ukuthi kuneqhwa eziningi, ngoba amathrekhi ajulile ngokwanele. I-Sunset igcwalisa isithombe ngembala ekhethekile. Ekude umuntu angabona indlela abantu abaya ngayo emakhaya abo ukufihla kusuka efrijini. Kanye namahhashi abanjwe ngama-brushwood ezinqola eziya emzaneni.

Kulesi sithombe yonke into iphunga ebusika, inhlanhla kanye nomoya we-frosty. Kubonakala sengathi ngikule ndawo emangalisayo nomoya.

Le ncazelo yesithombe ifaneleka kakhulu kubafundi besikole esiphakeme.

Incazelo yesithombe kubafundi besikole esiphakeme

Izingane zamabanga aphezulu zingabhala umsebenzi ojulile futhi ogcwele. Isibonelo:

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I-Krymov, "Ubusuku Busihlwa" - isithombe, ukubunjwa okungenzima ukubhala nhlobo. Ukubuka lo msebenzi omuhle wezobuciko, njengokungathi ungena emkhathini wobusika, kungakhathaliseki ukuthi isimo sezulu singaphandle kwefasitela. Umbhali onemibala nemininingwane wadlulisa isimo sengqondo nemicabango.

Kuyaqondakala ngokushesha ukuthi umbhali wenza iphuzu eliyinhloko eqhweni. Isithombe sonke sinezinhlanzi ezimhlophe zeqhwa. Akumangazi, ngoba lokhu kuyinto echaza ubusika baseRussia yangempela.

Esikhathini esingaphambili kukhona ukubuka ngaphandle kwezingqimba zeqhwa. Izinyoni zihlala ngokulandelana futhi zibuka abantu beya ekhaya. Ngemuva, amahhashi amaningana anama-brushwood ezinqola ahambahamba emigwaqeni ejulile eya emzaneni. Futhi abadala nabantwana baya emakhaya abo.

Uma ubukeka esithombeni kubonakala sengathi ngifaka umoya we-frosty futhi ngidolole phansi eqhweni leqhwa.

Indlela yokubeka kahle ama-accents uma uchaza umdwebo

Ukuchaza isithombe siphelele futhi sinemininingwane, kubalulekile ukugcizelela imifanekiso esemqoka yesakhiwo somsebenzi. Futhi kuyadingeka ukuchaza ngokuningiliziwe zonke izingxenye zomsebenzi wokudala womlobi. Izindlela ezengeziwe ezitholakala ezintweni ezincane, indaba ethakazelisayo futhi ethakazelisayo iyoba.